DENTON WRITERS LEAGUE
FIRST EDITION
NOVEMBER 2003 VOL. 14 NUMBER 11

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WHERE WE MEET AND WHEN

The second Saturday of every month, at the

Denton Library-North Branch - click here for map 
3020 N. Locust St (corner of Windsor St & N. Locust St)
 Denton, TX

General Meeting 10:30 a.m.

Lunch at Noon at the
 Evergreen Super Buffet - click here for map 
1006 W. University Dr
Denton, TX 76201

NEXT MEETING - NOVEMBER 8, 2003


Guest Speakers

2003
November - Julie Rogers & June Ford
December - Open Meeting
 2004
January - Mike & Susan Farris, Farris Literary Agency
February - Pamela Stone
March - TBD
April - Roxanne Conrad
 

GUESTSPEAKER

Julie Rogers:

Julie Rogers' award-winning articles have been featured in numerous self-help, inspirational, and fiction publications, including Coping With Cancer, Daily Meditation, Complete Woman, and the annual anthology Writes of Passage: Every Woman has a Story! She is the author of Happy Tails: How Pets Can Help You Survive Divorce. Her online column "Pet Talk" features pets around the nation. Julie also publishes a newspaper column "Animal Talk" under her officership with Humane Society of the Ouachitas.

Julie is the 1999 Writer's Digest Writing Competition Grand Prize Winner for her short story "House Call." She is a journalism graduate of Southern Methodist University and co-founder of Good Shepherds Animal Assisted Therapy.

Julie is represented by Jeff Ross Management in Los Angeles. She is currently working on adapting her stage play "Santa Man" to screenplay for The Vine Entertainment in Los Angeles. She lives with her husband, son, and their many pets in Arkansas.

June Ford:

June Ford founded JFE Editorial Services in 1987. She has worked in a variety of editorial positions for publishing houses, magazines, and newspapers, including in-house for publishing companies as a managing editor, project editor, and editor. She has been commissioned to write trade books in categories ranging from psychology to business and finance, coffee table pictorials to true crime; and has ghost written children's board books, picture books, and chapter books.

In the genres of children's, juvenile, and young adult, June has worked with everything from board, picture, and educational books to nonfiction and fiction series. The majority of the books she has worked with have been or are slated to be nationally or internationally distributed.

June is a Texas writer-in-residence and has a bachelor's degree in the combined majors of print journalism/radio/television/film from Texas Christian University in Fort Worth, Texas.

Vist their website at http://www.jjworkshops.com/.


OCTOBER MEETING RECAP 

We had a fullhouse Sat. - 3 visitors and 1 new member.  Welcome to the group, Ben.

Diane Fanning spoke on how she gathered information for her book on serial killer, Tommy Lynn Sells and how to add suspense to your novel.  She gave us information on how to successfully manage an interview with a psychopath. The psychopath does not process information the same as we do, so be prepared for anything.  A few things to remember about talking with a psychopath are below:

  1. Be prepare to be manipulated - within reason
  2. Be prepared to manipulate - but do not lie
  3. Leave your self-respect at him
  4. Believe everything - believe nothing
  5. Surrender control - but seize the hooks
  6. Do not display shock
  7. Do not react to anger
  8. Laugh - or at least smile - at any jokes
  9. When eye contact is a challenge, do not look away
  10. Do not question the subject's paranoia
  11. Go home and take a shower

Diane saw a 20/20 report on Julia Ray and how she was sitting in jail for killing her son.  Julia maintained her innocence.  Diane asked Tommy Lynn in a round about way if he knew anything about the killing.  He admitted that he was the one who had killed the son.  Diane knew that the DA's office had pretty much railroaded Julia, so instead of trying to contact them with the information she had, she put it in a chapter in her book.  The book came out in April and by July 1st the legal gears started turning on reopening Julia's case. The Chicago Tribune ran the story about how Diane's book influenced the case against the railroaded victim. The story appeared in the Sunday 10/12 issue and can be found in the web.

When Diane talked about how to build suspense into your writing, I noticed that one suggestion came up that I hear in every genre - you have to make people care about your characters, even your villian/protagonist.

SUSPENSE CHECKLIST

  1. Does each major character have clear motivation for what he is doing? 
  2. Have I made these motivations clear to the reader?
  3. Do each character's actions logically lead to a new obstacle?
  4. With each new obstacle, I create new motivation.  Are these new motivations clear to the reader?
  5. Have I made the upcoming major conflict in the story inevitable?
  6. Is it clear how everyine and everything - perhaps even every place is different at the end of the story from the beginning?

Several ways to build suspense: action at the beginning of the story, conflict (one of the best is when both antagonist and protagonist are right), dialogue (no direct answers, be vague, or mimic the questioner), sentence structure and length (short choppy sentence for fast action and long descriptive ones to build up to the action), sudden attacks on the characters, slow build up to the conflict, scene shifting, and the rollercoaster method (taking the reader up and down - build up suspense to the penacle then wind down, then back up again). 

There was a Q&A afterwards which continued at lunch. 

Visit her website at http://www.dianefanning.com/pages/490990/index.htm . 


MEMBER NEWS

Jim Matheson's novelette, Lil' Bit's Heart of Christmas has been published Tattarsall Publishing.  The first 50 copies sold out in the first week.  If interested in obtaining a copy, please contact Crystal Wood at Tattersall at 940/565-0804 or visit Tattersall at http://www.tattersallpub.com/.


Make Your Book Stand Out from The Crowd: Know Your Audience

By Judy Cullins

When I ask who is your market, where will you find them, how can you reach them, how many books do you want to sell them, and how much money do you want to make on your book this year, most authors say, "Everyone will want my book, and when I take it to Oprah, it will sell millions, and I'll make millions, too."

Knowing your specific audience helps you give your book its unique selling point. Writing for your target audience focuses your writing and gives your book a great advantage because you know and can communicate your unique selling point. Now, your book will stand out from the crowd. Although not everyone will buy it, it will sell more copies because your buyers really want your message.

How do you know who your audience is? The biggest mistake most authors make is that they don't write for their one preferred audience. If an audience is "everyone," the book doesn't have an angle. Without an audience, your book has too much competition among other popular authors. The "Dummies" books have done well because they have one particular focus: beginners.

Know your audience inside and out through the "Audience Profile." Ask yourself these questions about the people who will read your book: What do they look like? How old are they? Male? Female? Age? Baby boomers? Seniors? Entrepreneurs? Corporate? What kind of work do they do? What is their income? What do they spend discretionary time and money on? Where do they live? What books and magazines do they read? What values and attitudes are reflected by those books? What are their interests, hobbies and values?

What challenges do they face for which they want answers? Are they business people, retired people, over 50? What radio shows do they listen to? What TV programs do they watch? What do they do with their free time? What events do they attend? What organizations do they belong to? What causes do they support? Are they Internet savvy? What kinds of sites do they visit and bookmark? How many of them are out there to sell to? What do they want? What do they need?

Go to your library or use the Internet to research just how many people belong to your audience. Ask for the reference books that have census and other information. All agents and publishers will look for this information in your book proposal.

Even if you publish this book yourself, do some market research. Research can help you with numbers: 45 million readers read new age books; 55 million baby boomers and 60 million seniors are out there. They buy online, too. Think of one segment of these groups your can write and market for: New Age newly divorced, age 50 and up; Senior women creating a new career at 60; Baby-boomer working mothers who want healthier food for their children.

By writing a focused book, you will attract your preferred audience because your whole book is devoted to answering its concerns.

Judy Cullins: author, publisher, book coach
Excerpted from: Ten Non-techie Ways to Market Your Book Online and Write your eBook or Other Short Book-Fast!
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Texas Conferences and Events

November 8-9, Texas Book Festival (Austin). Watch for  updates on website www.texasbookfestival.org. See TBF on this site and Partners.

November 28-30, Houston Book Festival, Town & Country Center, 1-10 & Beltway 8, Follow link for details on this website. Contact Rita Mills books@ghg.net or call 713-937-9184.

December 6, 2003, Fayetteville, 2nd Annual Texas Authors on the Square. See note below. Contact Lois Lawrence, leealawrence@houston.rr.com

February 15, 2004, Wimberley, Texas Writers Roundup, 3rd annual book fair benefiting Katherine Anne Porter School. See Roundup link on this website for details. Contact: Linda Bingham Linda@flamewriter.com .

February 20-22, ConDFW  http://www.condfw.org .

March 17-20, 2004, San Antonio, TLA Conference, Texas Library Association
http://www.txla.org/conference/conf.html

April 17, 2004, Denton, Texas, 4th Annual North Texas Book Festival) from 9 am till 4 pm at the Civic Center. Visit the NTBF website www.ntbf.org for a registration form. Booth fees are slightly higher this year, but percentage of sales is being eliminated.

From the Texas Author’s Coalition, Inc website. URL in listing below.


On-Line Writers resources

Author's Network-for writers about writing based in Europe, but interesting- http://www.author-network.com/
Copyright Forms-
http://www.loc.gov/copyright/forms/
Dallas Sceen Writers- http://www.dallasscreenwriters.com/
New Writer's Market http://hge.members.atlantic.net/
Preditors and Editors-a resources to check out agents and publishers http://www.anotherealm.com/prededitors/
Society of Children's Writers and Illustrators http://www.scbwi.org/
Texas Coalition of Authors, Inc. http://www.texasauthors.org/
The Novelist's Workshop-essays and advice on how to publish your book- http://www.monash.com/writers.html
Writer's Exchange http://www.writers-exchange.com/epublishing/
Writer's Market http://www.writersmarket.com/index_ns.asp
Writers Net-source for information for writers, editors, agents, and publishers- http://www.writers.net
The Zuzu's Petals Literary Resource Homepage-for both writers and poets- http://www.zuzu.com/

There are multitudes of writing resources available on the Internet. Go to any search engine and ask for writer's resources, writer's markets, writer's contests, writer's conferences, etc


DWL OFFICERS:

President       Joni Latham ( joni@verizon.net) - 940/243-5200
Vice President  June Powell - 940/565-1013
Treasurer       Joseph Marino
Newsletter      George Avera (
gavera@chatter.com) - 940/382-8161