DENTON WRITERS LEAGUE
FIRST EDITION
APRIL 2005 VOL. 16 NUMBER 4

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WHERE WE MEET AND WHEN

The second Saturday of every month, at the

Denton Library-North Branch - click here for map 
3020 N. Locust St (corner of Windsor St & N. Locust St)
 Denton, TX

General Meeting 10:30 a.m.

Lunch at Noon at the
 Evergreen Super Buffet - click here for map 
1006 W. University Dr
Denton, TX 76201

NEXT MEETING: APRIL 9, 2005


Guest Speakers

April 9 - Dr Nat Adams, DVM
May 14 - Jim Wilson, DVM - Meeting at the Evergreen Restaurant
June 11 - Chris Espinosa
July 9 - Joan R. Neubauer
August 13 - Cindy Vallar
September 10 - Workshop- George Wilhite
October 8 - Jim H. Ainsworth
November 12 - Barbara Carr
December 10 - General Meeting

GUEST SPEAKER

Dr Nat Adams grew up in Denton from age three.  She earned her BA in biology from North Texas University, her BA in Animal Science from Texas A&M University, and her Doctor of Veterinary Medicine from Texas A&M University in 1969.  She practiced in Denton from 1969-71, in New England from 1971-77, in Sanger from 1977-79, and in Denton from 1979 to the present. Currently, she limits her practice to canines, felines, ovines, and caprines. 

She has four children - all grown and gainfully employed.  She has eight cats, seven dogs, one-hundred goats, two-hundred sheep, and twelve horses, all unemployed and totally dependent. Her practice is located at the Veterinary Medical Clinic, 2412 Old North Road, #102, Denton, TX 76207; (940) 387-6090.

Note from George Avera: I have been present when Dr Adams received phone calls from Professors of veterinary medicine at major universities, who wanted her advice.  She is a nationally known expert, a Vet's Vet.


MARCH MEETING RECAP

Britta Coleman spoke on the art of rewriting and gave the group a couple of exercises that help you through "writer's block" and turn off the "internal critic" so that you can write faster. Her advice is finish the book and then return to the manuscript for the rewrites. Some writers spend so much time trying to perfect each chapter as they write that they never finish the novel.

The first exercise is called "free writing." Robert Ray (of The Weekend Novelist)originated the idea, and his book might be of interest. Sit down in a quiet place with a piece of paper and a pen. Decide on time limit to write. It can be 10 minutes, 20 minutes, or what ever you're comfortable with. Pick one of the following lead-ins:
    I remember when...
    Just when I thought it couldn't get any worse, I...
    I knew I hated him when..
    The first time I met her, we .
Start the timer and start writing.  Do not pause or lift your pen from paper. Don't use punctuations or caps. The names and scenes don't have to make sense. Just keep writing until the end of the time limit. Most people find that they find that they could and do keep writing after the timer sounds.

The other exercise is what she calls "the wheel of fortune." She learned the technique from Kimberly Willis Holt. Time yourself for this exercise, too. Start with a single idea (the center circle of a wagon wheel) and branch out (spokes on the wheel) from there filling in details (description of room or area, climate, character descriptions, emotions, activities, etc).

When starting your rewrites:

  1. Be as specific as you can be with your nouns and verbs. Instead of "she walked rapidly," use a type of walk, "she raced."
  2. Stay away from clichés.
  3. Use metaphors, such as describing an approaching storm as a wild beast about to charge.
  4. Put your characters in conflicted and interesting situations. Character conflicts move the scenes along. Making nice-nice can be boring. Example: instead of arguing on a street corner where no one cares, have them argue while shopping with the salesperson trying to talk to them at the same time. What does the character want and what is keeping them from getting it?
  5. Explode the moment as opposed to killing your little darlings. Expand and build up the big scenes. Remove the scenes that do not move the story along even if it's a scene you love, kill it.
  6. Adverbs are not your friends.
  7. Every scene needs a couple of purposes.
  8. Third circle of rewrite hell. How far is too far? When do you stop rewriting so that you don't rewrite yourself out of being published?

Visit Britta at her website http://www.brittacoleman.com/ and checkout her novel Potters Springs when it's available in June 2005.  This poignantly rendered debut novel follows the Texas-sized loves and losses of star-crossed newlyweds. Spurred by an unforeseen tragedy, Mark and Amanda Reynolds leave big city life to settle in Potter Springs, Texas. Amidst colorful characters and unpredictable friendships, Mark and Amanda struggle to forge a future together.


Editing on a Shoestring: 12 Tips

By Barbara Munson

 

With no end to the economic doldrums in sight, you may be tempted to put your book on the back burner and wait for better times. After all, publishing a book can take a substantial outlay of funds. Eventually, of course, you will recoup those expenses and hopefully make a tidy profit on your book, but getting over the current financial hurdles can be challenging.

You do have some options, however, to help minimize the crunch--without sacrificing quality. One of them is to save on up-front costs by learning how to be a savvy manager of the editing process. Here are some ideas from a book editor's point of view:

  1. Find an editor who understands the genre of your book and who has credentials or experience with other books in your field. Hiring a fiction book editor to edit a self-help or history book, or vice versa, could result in more time spent editing-and larger fees. Get samples of other jobs he or she has edited, or get the names of past clients to call. Then call!

  2. Discuss all fees with your editor up front. Remember the editor is in business, even though you would like to consider him or her to be your best friend, trusted confidante, shoulder to cry on, etc. Nail down the fees for the job before the editor begins working on your book.

  3. Explain precisely what you want from your editor. For example, saying, "Take a look and tell me what you think," wastes the editor's time and your money. Instead, say, "My goal for the book is ______________. I'd like you to tell me if I have accomplished this goal." Or, "I am wondering if chapter one should be moved to the end of the book. What do you think?"

  4. Do you need help with marketing and promoting your book or researching the competition? Select an editor based on those needs, as well. You may find that your editor is just as knowledgeable about the book industry and marketing as an outside consultant, and may charge lower fees.

  5. Before you turn over your manuscript to your editor, do as much work on it as possible yourself. Use your computer's spell check and grammar check. Have a friend review the manuscript and point out anything that looks wrong. Try reading it out loud--this will help you spot poorly constructed sentences and confusing areas. If possible, give your editor the complete manuscript instead of a chapter here, a chapter there. This will eliminate the extra time the editor will need to spend rereading to ensure overall consistency.

  6. Discuss style manuals and special styles you don't want changed, for example, the use of lower case in a certain area. Remember e e cummings?

  7. Discuss deadlines and stick to them.

  8. Not all editors give written contracts, but if you want one, they will be happy to oblige. The contract should include timeframe, fees, and responsibilities of the author versus the editor (including who is responsible for checking that final proof from the printer).

  9. View your editor as a team member. Keep him or her in the loop, just as you would if you were in a work environment.

  10. Unless you are dead set against a change, do everything the editor suggests. The editor is a professional--the best person for the job. If you are not sure why your editor red-marked an area of your copy, ask.

  11. Determine whether your editor prefers online or hard-copy editing. If you send your manuscript electronically and the editor has to print it out to work on it, that costs time and money. Who will make the corrections to the actual file? You could save money by making them yourself, but don't miss any changes or notations the editor has indicated!

  12. Avoid making substantial changes after you have sent the manuscript to the typesetter. If you have planned and organized your book well, and you and your editor are satisfied with it, avoid the temptation to "just add a few more paragraphs."
Barbara Munson is an author and owner of Two Pillars Press, a small publisher of non-fiction books, biographies and memoirs founded in 1996. She also owns Munson Communications, which provides editing, copywriting, ghostwriting and publicity services to small businesses and independent publishers. Based in Golden, Colorado, Munson currently serves on the Board of Directors of the Colorado Independent Publishers Association and is editor of CIPA Newsline, the monthly publication of CIPA. You can reach her at MunsonBarb@aol.com or (303)526-9095. For information about CIPA, go to www.CIPAbooks.com.

Reprinted from BookZone Pro, http://www.bookzonepro.com


On-Line Writers resources

Author's Network-for writers about writing based in Europe, but interesting- http://www.author-network.com/
Copyright Forms-
http://www.loc.gov/copyright/forms/
Dallas Sceen Writers- http://www.dallasscreenwriters.com/
Denton Public Library -
http://www.cityofdenton.com/pages/library.cfm
National Association of Women Writers -
http://www.naww.org
National Writers Union - http://www.nwu.org/
New Writer's Market
http://hge.members.atlantic.net/
Para Publishing Website - a good writing, publishing, and promotion source - http://parapub.com/getpage.cfm?file=/homepage.html&user=#user
Preditors and Editors-a resources to check out agents and publishers
http://www.anotherealm.com/prededitors/
Ralan's Webstravaganza-speculative fiction resource http://ralan.com/

Society of Children's Writers and Illustrators - http://www.scbwi.org/
Texas Coalition of Authors, Inc. - http://www.texasauthors.org/
Texas Writers League - http://www.writersleague.org/
The Market List-the online resource for genre fiction writers http://www.marketlist.com/
The Novelist's Workshop-essays and advice on how to publish your book- http://www.monash.com/writers.html
Writer's Exchange -
http://www.writers-exchange.com/epublishing/
Writer's Market -
http://www.writersmarket.com/index_ns.asp
Writers Net-source for information for writers, editors, agents, and publishers - http://www.writers.net
Writing-World.Com - 
http://www.writing-world.com 
The Zuzu's Petals Literary Resource Homepage-for both writers and poets- http://www.zuzu.com/

There are multitudes of writing resources available on the Internet. Go to any search engine and ask for writer's resources, writer's markets, writer's contests, writer's conferences, etc


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Vice President  June Powell - 940/565-1013
Treasurer       Joseph Marino
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georgeavera@copper.net
) - 940/382-8161